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Visitors from Down the Street: my review

Jphalt@Aol.Com 7 September 2008 17:06:22
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"The X-Files" gets filtered through the B5 universe in this light-
hearted installment.


PLACEMENT NOTE

With the inclusion of the scripts, uniform continuity becomes an
actual issue. "Visitors" therefore must come within the run of "gray
uniform" episodes preceding "To the Ends of the Earth." With that
consideration, I felt it best to place it shortly before the end of
the brief "gray uniform" run ? after several episodes that established
plot and character details ? but to let the "gray uniforms" bow out on
the more arc-heavy "Each Night I Dream of Home." Leaving the run as:

War Zone (the mission begins)
Ruling from the Tomb (introduction of Lochley; establishes Doomsday
cults as a real threat)
The Well of Forever (referenced in TTEOTE, so must come before the
uniform switch)
Appearances & Other Deceits (introduces gray uniforms)
Racing the Night (original opening episode; introduction of Apocalypse
Box)
The Needs of Earth (character work for several crew members)
The Memory of War (more on Shadow technology and Techno-mages; darker
Galen hints)
Visitors from Down the Street (light-hearted standalone)

Looked at in that context, it just feels right for a more or less
inconsequential episode to fall after a run of moderately heavy plot
and/or character episodes.


THE PLOT

The Excalibur picks up a lifepod that is adrift in space. The ship is
of unknown design and origin, and Gideon and Matheson prepare
themselves for a first contact situation. They are unprepared for what
they find, however: two suit-wearing aliens who speak perfect English,
and who are filled with a paranoid conviction that the development of
their race has been interfered with by humans.

Gideon listens to the evidence of Durkani, the leader of the two
aliens. With his partner, Lyssa, Durkani has worked to uncover bits
and pieces of a conspiracy involving high-ranking members of his
government. When he and Lyssa found their lives in danger from
Kendarr, a particularly crafty government agent, they stowed away
aboard a spaceship and ejected into the lifepod, hoping to encounter
the humans they were certain must exist. In short, they?re an alien
Mulder and Scully, and we?re seeing the flip-side of an "X-Files"
episode.

Just as Gideon is reaching a decision about how to deal with his two
alien guests, he receives another transmission, from another alien.
Kendarr has tracked his quarry to the Excalibur. Now it is Kendarr?s
turn to make his case to Gideon. Kendarr?s case is logical,
reasonable, and has one severe complication:

If Gideon turns Durkani and Lyssa over to him, they will be
transported back home? and executed!


THE GOOD

I recalled this episode as being probably the worst thing ever
produced under the "Babylon 5" banner. One of the reasons for the
sizable gap between my last review and this one is that I was actively
putting off re-watching this episode.

As with a few B5 episodes, it defied my memory. Perhaps it came from
going in this time with lowered expectations. Perhaps it just came
from watching a little more closely, in order to give it a proper
analysis in the review. Whatever the case, "Visitors from Down the
Street" is far better than I remembered it being.

Don?t get me wrong ? I still think it?s "Crusade?s" weakest episode
(yes, including "War Zone"). But this time around, I found a fair
amount here to like, and I?d honestly say that there are a fair
handful of B5 episodes that were weaker than this one is.


The first half of the show offers some fine character beats.
Immediately after the credits, we see Matheson using his abilities to
defuse a hostage situation, making Durkani drop his gun by making him
see and feel a snake on his arm. Afterwards, Gideon presses Matheson
to tell him what he "saw" in Durkani?s mind. Matheson resists,
pointing out to Gideon how important it is for him to follow the new
rules for telepaths. Gideon keeps on pushing, however, asking his
first officer to at least give him "a sense of the room." It?s just
another piece making clear that for Gideon, rules are flexible and can
even be ignored altogether when they?re inconvenient for him. This is
even further underlined by the ending, in which Gideon makes a
decision that would have had Capt. Kirk court-martialed into oblivion.
His response to potential critics of his decision? "Screw ?em." This
sort of thing reinforces what I noted in my "Racing the Night" review,
that the Gideon of the first-filmed "gray uniform" episodes is just a
bit edgier than the Gideon of the post-TNT interference, "black
uniform" episodes.

There also were some decidedly clever bits in the main narrative. The
scene in which Durkani shows his "evidence" to Gideon is quite
amusing, with the "gas formation" (a blimp), the "weather balloon,"
and the half-demolished golf club all providing definite chuckles. I
also couldn?t help but smile when Kendarr (this episode?s answer to "X-
Files?" Cigarette Smoking Man) is introduced. Rather than smoking a
cigarette, he incessantly clings to one of his tentacles and twirls
it, somewhat like CSM would handle his cigarettes (or, for that
matter, like a silent movie villain might twirl his mustache). The
character's final bit of screen business is also greatly amusing.

Lastly, I greatly appreciated that all the characters here behave
quite reasonably, given the limits of their knowledge. Durkani
(Mulder) has uncovered too much evidence to ignore, and has gradually
tilted from being interested in this evidence to outright pursuing it
as a personal crusade. In the process, he?s made himself appear to be
a lunatic? However, his responses to Gideon show that he is not
actually a lunatic, and is quite willing to give the captain the
benefit of the doubt. Kendarr makes a persuasive case to Gideon as to
why his government acts in the way it does, and ? as with CSM (at
least, in the early seasons, before "X-Files" lost its way) ? there is
the sense that though he is the villain of the piece, Kendarr is
actually doing what he believes is right. Gideon is left to try to
pick his own way between the two extremes Durkani and Kendarr offer,
and most of his attempts to rely on good old common horse sense end up
actually making the situation worse? at least, until he figures out
the full situation, and uses his resources to act upon it at the end.


THE BAD

One question that I keep coming back to is why JMS felt a need to make
this episode, and most particularly to make it one of the first
episodes out the gate. It seems to me that, in the first season of a
show (a notoriously difficult time for any series ? even spinoffs -
most of which frankly don?t make it), that you should be establishing
your series and characters. There?s absolutely a place for a filler
episode that sends up the conventions of another genre show. But that
place is in the second or third season; that place is certainly not as
one of the first episodes filmed of a brand new series.

That?s my own personal opinion, and wouldn?t matter if this episode
was as fast, clever, and funny as it clearly wants to be. To its
credit, the episode is reasonably clever, and the plotting ? as
expected, from JMS ? hangs together admirably. Unfortunately, the
episode is not fast; the pace is outright sluggish. Even in the final
act, when the situation should be turning into chaos, there?s no sense
of urgency to the proceedings. As a comedy, a slow pace could be
offset by humor? However, the episode also isn?t really all that
funny. The best moments (i. e., the golf club, the Tentacle Twirling
Man) raise a smile or a chuckle. There isn?t one moment which gets me
laughing out loud, and too many of the gags land with an outright
thud.

It was also just a little too clear that the actors knew that this
episode was a comedy. There are places where you can actually see Gary
Cole and Daniel Dae Kim pausing, like sit-com actors waiting for the
canned laughter to die down. At the very least, it?s obvious that they
think the lines they are delivering are funny? which affects their
delivery in such a way as to make them far less funny. It pains me to
write this, because I?ve been generally a big fan of the two actors?
performances in this series, but Cole and Kim actually kill some of
the jokes here by trying too hard to sell them.

Finally, for shallow complaints? Was this actually the first episode
filmed, with some sets unfinished or some lighting yet to be properly
navigated? Or were they going for a noir look that backfired? Because
while most of the "Crusade" episodes have looked amazingly polished,
even moreso than the superbly-produced last two seasons of "Babylon 5"
did, this episode doesn?t. In fact, this episode somehow just looks
cheap. Again, it wouldn?t matter if the rest of the episode was
stronger; many Season One B5 episodes were very good to excellent,
despite frequently looking cheap as dirt. In an episode that?s
moderately weak, however, the sense of cheapness and smallness really
does stand out.


My Final Rating: 5/10.


Next Up: "Each Night I Dream of Home."


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Joseph DeMartino 27 April 2008 18:16:04 permanent link ]
 This is one of those ideas that I really wish JMS had assigned to
another writer, because comedy is not his thing. He can do funny (or
more often witty) lines within the context of a dramatic story, elicit
smiles and chuckles as you've noted, but when he tries for laugh-out-
loud comedy or farce, he just doesn't have the perfect instinct
required. In comedy an inch or a split second is that difference
between total success and utter failure, and JMS misses more than he
hits in this area. Drama is a *much* more forgiving form, both for
writers and actors. (More on this below.)

Blending comedy (or farce) into an existing dramatic format is even
trickier. You can't turn a dramatic SF series into a sitcom for one
episode and then have it return to normal the following week. (And
remember - there's a *reason* there are no one hour sitcoms and why
comedy movies are usually about 25% shorter than dramatic ones. You
usually can't sustain a comic situation for too long without straining
credulity.)

David Gerrold is one of the few writers in Hollywood with a
demonstrated track record in doing this kind of thing (hell, his very
first sale of any kind as a professional writer was the TREK episode
"The Trouble with Tribbles") and he's written for "B5" as well. I
think he could have done a very nice job with "Visitors".

Having said that --

I always liked the episode more than most fans seem to have, and I'd
certainly rate it above "War Zone". (Of course, I'd rate 60 minutes
of a TV test pattern with a John Tesh soundtrack higher than "War
Zone".) Nor do I think it odd that JMS would do something like this
in the early in the first season of a new show. (Also I'd reject the
term "filler" as a description of this episode and others like it.
Stand alone episodes aren't "filler" thrown in to kill time before we
get to the next "real" - which is to say "hits us over the head with
the ARC" - episode.)

JMS has always done, or tried to do, a couple of things on all of his
arc shows. (S3 and S4 of "B5" being patial exceptions to do
production and story issues.) 1) *Gradually* raise the ratio of arc
to stand-alone episodes each season, always starting with few arc
episodes in S1 and building to almost 100% arc by season 5 (at least
as the shows were planneed.) 2) Make the show accessible to new
eyeballs, especially during the critical first weeks of each new TV
season. This means self-contained stories that hint at the larger
pattern but don't leave the viewier feeling like he has walked into a
movie 20 minutes after it started. 3) Do at least one show per
season that is "off format" and looks at the series from a different
perspective or which plays with the forms and conventions of
television. ("...And Now for a Word", "The Corps is Mother, the Corps
is Father", "Intersections in Realtime", "A View from the Gallery",
"The Very Long Night of Londo Mollari", all fit the pattern.) I
think this was CRUSADE'S off-format episode for year one.

Finally, for all the obvious "X-Files" fun JMS was having, the episode
as a whole was almost an extended reflection on TREK'S Prime
Directive, and the whole thing pointed to Gideon's action at the end.
Yet another reminder (B5 had many, including "Believers" and
"Confessions and Lamentations") that this is *not* Your Father's SF
Universe.

Cole and Kim actually kill some of the jokes here by trying too hard to sell them. <

I'm always reluctant to criticize actors or performances as "bad".
Maybe havng done a lot of college and community theater, as well as
student film (as a producer, director and writer, as well as an actor)
makes me too aware of how much of a perforrmance is outside the
actor's control. Even in live theater, where you are seeing the
whole peformance in one shot, it is hard to tell is something you
don't like is the actor's idea or something that the director (or even
the playwright) insisted on. If actor "A"'s peformance seems "off" it
is often the fault of actor "B", perhaps someone with a smaller role,
who is screwing up in some subtler way that is throwing actor "A"
off. A filmed performance is even harder to judge. Not only does the
director have a lot more control in those cases, but what ends up on
screen isn't a sustained performance, but some combination of moments
from probalby 5 or 6 different takes, in which the director may have
*asked* the actors to try several approaches to each line. The final
assembly of moments is put together by the editor, tweked by the
director and furhter tweaked by the producer. Especially in comedy,
the timing of a sequence can be utterly changed in editing, with good
or bad results. Did Cole "pause after his line" or did Cole deliver
his one and only line in a given close up and then stay silent while
the camera continued to roll? If the editor stayed on the shot too
long before cutting to Kim, that isn't Cole's fault.

Question: Is it the case that a) Natalie Portman is a really awful
actress, or b) George Lucas is a guy who writes awful, literally
"unspeakable", dialogue and a dreadful director of actors? If all
you saw of Portman was the "Star Wars" movies, you might be tempted to
answer "a" But if you look at how many bad performances Lucas got
from otherwise good actors in the 2nd "Star Wars" trilogy, you quickly
come to understand that 30 years of playing with Muppets and computers
having more money than God have totally atrophied the directing talent
he showed in "American Graffitti". And done nothing to advance his
writing skills beyond where they were on the day Carrie Fisher told
him, "George, you can *write* this stuff, but you can't *say* it")

The fault, dear jphalt, lay not in his stars, but in himself. <g>

That is the case more often than some folks realize.

Regards,

Joe

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Matt Ion 27 April 2008 22:46:33 permanent link ]
 jphalt@aol.com wrote:

PLACEMENT NOTE
With the inclusion of the scripts, uniform continuity becomes an
actual issue. "Visitors" therefore must come within the run of "gray
uniform" episodes preceding "To the Ends of the Earth." With that
consideration, I felt it best to place it shortly before the end of
the brief "gray uniform" run ?

Wandering far astray of the thread here, I don't get all the fuss over
the changing uniform colors anyway. Why is it so hard to think that
they just keep both in their closets and wear a different color for a
different day of the week or something? Grey uniforms on Monday,
Wednesday and Friday, originals on the other days... or whatever. Maybe
Gideon just makes a shipwide announcement, "everyone wear the grey
tomorrow!" and the one we see in any given episode just depends on what
day we catch them.

I just don't think it needs to be a defining (or confusing) factor when
figuring out the sequence of episodes. I mean, the uniform change in S3
of B5 is a pretty defining thing, but in Crusade? Not so much...



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Jphalt@Aol.Com 28 April 2008 00:25:15 permanent link ]
 On Apr 27, 11:46 am, Matt Ion <soundy...@gmail.co­m> wrote:
jph...@aol.com wrote:

Wandering far astray of the thread here, I don't get all the fuss over
the changing uniform colors anyway. Why is it so hard to think that
they just keep both in their closets and wear a different color for a
different day of the week or something?
I just don't think it needs to be a defining (or confusing) factor when
figuring out the sequence of episodes. I mean, the uniform change in S3
of B5 is a pretty defining thing, but in Crusade? Not so much...

I would 100% agree - and did, with my original sequence.
Unfortunately, the script for "To the Ends of the Earth" EXPLICITLY
switches the crew back to the black uniforms. Were it not for that
script, I would treat uniform continuiity (post-Appearances) as a non-
issue. But since that script, which I am including in this run, makes
it explicit that the "gray uniform" episodes have to occur altogether,
my choices are:

(a) remove that script (or at least ignore that sequence)

OR

(b) acknowledge uniform continuity (much as I'd rather not)


That's the "why."

Quite honestly, if you're only using the transmitted episodes, the
sequence I came up with originally is probably best. However, with
the unfilmed scripts, there is no practical way to ignore the uniform
issue, as downright silly as it might seem.

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Matt Ion 28 April 2008 00:48:34 permanent link ]
 jphalt@aol.com wrote:

Quite honestly, if you're only using the transmitted episodes, the
sequence I came up with originally is probably best. However, with
the unfilmed scripts, there is no practical way to ignore the uniform
issue, as downright silly as it might seem.

To my recollection (and granted, I haven't watched Crusade right through
in a long time), the only place it's even MENTIONED in the show is when
the "image consultants" make the change in the first place... beyond
that, I can't think of any place (at least in the produced episodes)
that the color of the uniforms is actually relevant to ANYTHING. I
suppose that's why I don't get the whole fuss about it.

I mean, personally, I didn't even notice when they first made the change
- I remember the whole bit with the image consultants, but their
changing the uniforms seemed about as significant at the time as, say,
someone noticing that a Picasa has been hung upside-down and flipping it
over. If it hadn't been for the subsequent fanboi-style debates over it
all, I never would have given it a second thought, so I don't get why
anyone else has either.


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Jphalt@Aol.Com 28 April 2008 01:19:51 permanent link ]
 On Apr 27, 1:48 pm, Matt Ion <soundy...@gmail.co­m> wrote:
jph...@aol.com wrote:
Quite honestly, if you're only using the transmitted episodes, the
sequence I came up with originally is probably best. However, with
the unfilmed scripts, there is no practical way to ignore the uniform
issue, as downright silly as it might seem.
To my recollection (and granted, I haven't watched Crusade right through
in a long time), the only place it's even MENTIONED in the show is when
the "image consultants" make the change in the first place... beyond
that, I can't think of any place (at least in the produced episodes)
that the color of the uniforms is actually relevant to ANYTHING. I
suppose that's why I don't get the whole fuss about it.
I mean, personally, I didn't even notice when they first made the change
- I remember the whole bit with the image consultants, but their
changing the uniforms seemed about as significant at the time as, say,
someone noticing that a Picasa has been hung upside-down and flipping it
over. If it hadn't been for the subsequent fanboi-style debates over it
all, I never would have given it a second thought, so I don't get why
anyone else has either.


I'll repeat: I'd 100% agree if I was only using the completed, filmed,
transmitted episodes. But with the unfilmed scripts - in which the
uniform change IS EXPLICITLY MADE AN ISSUE by the teaser for "To the
Ends of the Earth" - my only choices are to not include the script
(and I'm including it), to close my eyes and pretend that page-and-a-
half of script doesn't exist (unacceptable), or to revise my sequence
to acknowledge the uniform change.


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Matt Ion 28 April 2008 01:21:34 permanent link ]
 jphalt@aol.com wrote:
On Apr 27, 1:48 pm, Matt Ion <soundy...@gmail.co­m> wrote:
jph...@aol.com wrote:
Quite honestly, if you're only using the transmitted episodes, the
sequence I came up with originally is probably best. However, with
the unfilmed scripts, there is no practical way to ignore the uniform
issue, as downright silly as it might seem.
To my recollection (and granted, I haven't watched Crusade right through
in a long time), the only place it's even MENTIONED in the show is when
the "image consultants" make the change in the first place... beyond
that, I can't think of any place (at least in the produced episodes)
that the color of the uniforms is actually relevant to ANYTHING. I
suppose that's why I don't get the whole fuss about it.
I mean, personally, I didn't even notice when they first made the change
- I remember the whole bit with the image consultants, but their
changing the uniforms seemed about as significant at the time as, say,
someone noticing that a Picasa has been hung upside-down and flipping it
over. If it hadn't been for the subsequent fanboi-style debates over it
all, I never would have given it a second thought, so I don't get why
anyone else has either.
I'll repeat: I'd 100% agree if I was only using the completed, filmed,
transmitted episodes. But with the unfilmed scripts - in which the
uniform change IS EXPLICITLY MADE AN ISSUE by the teaser for "To the
Ends of the Earth" - my only choices are to not include the script
(and I'm including it), to close my eyes and pretend that page-and-a-
half of script doesn't exist (unacceptable), or to revise my sequence
to acknowledge the uniform change.

I'm not picking on your reviews or methods, just kind of speaking
generally about this whole "uniform" topic. There's been an ongoing
debate almost since the start about the "proper" sequence of episodes,
with Joe even listing his specific preference. There are ways THE STORY
makes sense, and yet people get hung up on which uniforms they're
wearing on which days. It's almost like, for some, the only thing that
matters is whether the uniforms are in the right sequence, regardless of
how the storyline works, regardless of what Joe says.

Not saying that's you, just saying, it's been made a way bigger deal
than it really should be.

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John W Kennedy 28 April 2008 06:04:09 permanent link ]
 jphalt@aol.com wrote:
One question that I keep coming back to is why JMS felt a need to make
this episode, and most particularly to make it one of the first
episodes out the gate. It seems to me that, in the first season of a
show (a notoriously difficult time for any series ? even spinoffs -
most of which frankly don?t make it), that you should be establishing
your series and characters. There?s absolutely a place for a filler
episode that sends up the conventions of another genre show. But that
place is in the second or third season; that place is certainly not as
one of the first episodes filmed of a brand new series.

You are not making sufficient allowances for the differences between the
network market and the cable/syndication market. Once a cable or
syndication show is signed for a season, it will not normally be
canceled for ratings, unless they are quite abysmal. The season is safe,
and the long view is what determines the question of renewal. (What
happened to "Crusade", of course, is an exception, but Joe didn't even
know what was going on there until years later.)

Then, too, "Crusade" could expect to hold on to the majority of the
established "Babylon 5" audience.

Moreover, "Crusade" was always intended to be a far more episodic
series. I'm sure that, if the show had run five years, there would have
been more episodes like "Visitors" -- perhaps even a few more specific
satires. Indeed, one thing I miss in modern television is the old
tradition of putting an occasional comic episode into a drama, like "The
Trouble with Tribbles" -- or "Hoss and the Leprechauns".


--
John W. Kennedy
"Never try to take over the international economy based on a radical
feminist agenda if you're not sure your leader isn't a transvestite."
-- David Misch: "She-Spies", "While You Were Out"

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Amy Guskin 28 April 2008 07:17:08 permanent link ]
 
On Sun, 27 Apr 2008 18:22:40 -0400, Matt Ion wrote
(in article <fv2uf8$48q$1@regis­tered.motzarella.org­>):

jphalt@aol.com wrote:
On Apr 27, 1:48 pm, Matt Ion <soundy...@gmail.co­m> wrote:
jph...@aol.com wrote:
Quite honestly, if you're only using the transmitted episodes, the
sequence I came up with originally is probably best. However, with
the unfilmed scripts, there is no practical way to ignore the uniform
issue, as downright silly as it might seem.
To my recollection (and granted, I haven't watched Crusade right through
in a long time), the only place it's even MENTIONED in the show is when
the "image consultants" make the change in the first place... beyond
that, I can't think of any place (at least in the produced episodes)
that the color of the uniforms is actually relevant to ANYTHING. I
suppose that's why I don't get the whole fuss about it.
I mean, personally, I didn't even notice when they first made the change
- I remember the whole bit with the image consultants, but their
changing the uniforms seemed about as significant at the time as, say,
someone noticing that a Picasa has been hung upside-down and flipping it
over. If it hadn't been for the subsequent fanboi-style debates over it
all, I never would have given it a second thought, so I don't get why
anyone else has either.
I'll repeat: I'd 100% agree if I was only using the completed, filmed,
transmitted episodes. But with the unfilmed scripts - in which the
uniform change IS EXPLICITLY MADE AN ISSUE by the teaser for "To the
Ends of the Earth" - my only choices are to not include the script
(and I'm including it), to close my eyes and pretend that page-and-a-
half of script doesn't exist (unacceptable), or to revise my sequence
to acknowledge the uniform change.
I'm not picking on your reviews or methods, just kind of speaking
generally about this whole "uniform" topic. There's been an ongoing
debate almost since the start about the "proper" sequence of episodes,
with Joe even listing his specific preference. There are ways THE STORY
makes sense, and yet people get hung up on which uniforms they're
wearing on which days. It's almost like, for some, the only thing that
matters is whether the uniforms are in the right sequence, regardless of
how the storyline works, regardless of what Joe says.
Not saying that's you, just saying, it's been made a way bigger deal
than it really should be. <<

Matt, it rarely happens, but I have to completely agree with you on this.

Amy
--
"In my line of work you gotta keep repeating things over and over and over
again for the truth to sink in, to kinda catapult the propaganda." - George
W. Bush, May 24, 2005

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Matt Ion 28 April 2008 07:27:29 permanent link ]
 Amy Guskin wrote:


Matt, it rarely happens, but I have to completely agree with you on this.

Stop it, you're scaring me!

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Matt Ion 28 April 2008 07:32:11 permanent link ]
 John W Kennedy wrote:

Moreover, "Crusade" was always intended to be a far more episodic
series. I'm sure that, if the show had run five years, there would have
been more episodes like "Visitors" -- perhaps even a few more specific
satires. Indeed, one thing I miss in modern television is the old
tradition of putting an occasional comic episode into a drama, like "The
Trouble with Tribbles" -- or "Hoss and the Leprechauns".

We besides, we never know where "Visitors" might have come into play
later... like (hoping this doesn't sound like a story idea), our
intrepid Crusaders follow the leads, sometime in the second season, to a
crucial bit of information held by the beleaguered "Mulder & Scully" duo...

Or something like that.

To paraphrase from Wayne's World: "Wow, that episode really came in
handy. It seemed extraneous at the time..."

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Jphalt@Aol.Com 28 April 2008 08:53:32 permanent link ]
 On Apr 27, 8:17pm, Amy Guskin <aisl...@fjordstone­.com> wrote:
On Sun, 27 Apr 2008 18:22:40 -0400, Matt Ion wrote
(in article <fv2uf8$48...@regis­tered.motzarella.org­>):
jph...@aol.com wrote:
On Apr 27, 1:48 pm, Matt Ion <soundy...@gmail.co­m> wrote:
jph...@aol.com wrote:
Quite honestly, if you're only using the transmitted episodes, the
sequence I came up with originally is probably best. However, with
the unfilmed scripts, there is no practical way to ignore the uniform
issue, as downright silly as it might seem.
To my recollection (and granted, I haven't watched Crusade right through
in a long time), the only place it's even MENTIONED in the show is when
the "image consultants" make the change in the first place... beyond
that, I can't think of any place (at least in the produced episodes)
that the color of the uniforms is actually relevant to ANYTHING. I
suppose that's why I don't get the whole fuss about it.
I mean, personally, I didn't even notice when they first made the change
- I remember the whole bit with the image consultants, but their
changing the uniforms seemed about as significant at the time as, say,
someone noticing that a Picasa has been hung upside-down and flipping it
over. If it hadn't been for the subsequent fanboi-style debates over it
all, I never would have given it a second thought, so I don't get why
anyone else has either.
I'll repeat: I'd 100% agree if I was only using the completed, filmed,
transmitted episodes. But with the unfilmed scripts - in which the
uniform change IS EXPLICITLY MADE AN ISSUE by the teaser for "To the
Ends of the Earth" - my only choices are to not include the script
(and I'm including it), to close my eyes and pretend that page-and-a-
half of script doesn't exist (unacceptable), or to revise my sequence
to acknowledge the uniform change.
I'm not picking on your reviews or methods, just kind of speaking
generally about this whole "uniform" topic. There's been an ongoing
debate almost since the start about the "proper" sequence of episodes,
with Joe even listing his specific preference. There are ways THE STORY
makes sense, and yet people get hung up on which uniforms they're
wearing on which days. It's almost like, for some, the only thing that
matters is whether the uniforms are in the right sequence, regardless of
how the storyline works, regardless of what Joe says.
Not saying that's you, just saying, it's been made a way bigger deal
than it really should be. <<
Matt, it rarely happens, but I have to completely agree with you on this.
Amy
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I don't know. I've explained twice in this thread - indeed, in the
quoted section - exactly why I have, late in the game, revised my
sequence to include the uniforms. Namely, that I'm including the
unfilmed scripts, and that one of them explicitly makes uniform
continuity an issue. Since I'm including the script, I don't see how
I can ignore the continuity issues that are very much a part of that
script. So far as I can see, no one has actually made a reply to that
point. But I'm honestly too tired to keep arguing it.



Which raises another thing that's been building for a while...


I've enjoyed doing these reviews, and posting these reviews here.
I've enjoyed seeing what reaction they get. But lately, it's stopped
being so much fun. Some of that's reaction - these days, it seems the
reviews are either ignored or draw complaints, sometimes complaints
that have little enough to do with what I actually wrote (the reaction
to my "Legend of the Rangers" review, in particular, had vehement
replies to criticisms of the show... that were mostly not the
criticisms I had actually made). But in fairness, that's not all of
it. After all, the single most negative reaction one of my reviews
ever got was, I believe, "Grail" - and that was a very long time ago
now. It's just that this has all started to feel a bit draining.


I'll continue to write the reviews - with 18 reviews left, it would be
silly not to - and I'll still post them to my thread for them on the
Television Forum at Outpost Gallifrey. But I think it's time for me
to stop posting them here. After all, this was always meant to be a
way for me to mentally relax myself. When posting reviews on the
Internet for a television show starts to actually create stress
instead of relieve it, that's probably a sign that it's time to stop.


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Guest 28 April 2008 12:30:08 permanent link ]
 On 28 Apr, 05:53, "jph...@aol.com" <jph...@aol.com> wrote:

I'll continue to write the reviews - with 18 reviews left, it would be
silly not to - and I'll still post them to my thread for them on the
Television Forum at Outpost Gallifrey. But I think it's time for me
to stop posting them here. After all, this was always meant to be a
way for me to mentally relax myself. When posting reviews on the
Internet for a television show starts to actually create stress
instead of relieve it, that's probably a sign that it's time to stop.

That's a shame. Will you continue to archive them on the People of
RASTB5 Yahoo group? That's where I usually pick them up. As to the 'no
comments' thing, I've been following these with interest, usually
there is nothing left unsaid by you.

One thing I will add - I've recently been re-reading your reviews, and
the JMS Comments sections over on the Lurker's Guide. It's funny to
compare how hysterical people's reactions were at the time of original
broadcast to half-dud episode like Grey 17 or a non-arc 'filler' like
A Late Delivery from Avalon, against your reviews done after the
series os done, knowing where everything fits in and being able to
look much more dispassionately at the whole thing.

The other thing is, I'm surprised there's as many as 18 reviews still
to go.


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Jan 28 April 2008 14:50:04 permanent link ]
 In article <64d7aaaf-8919-4ad6­-9f93-08f35c8a6686@u­36g2000prf.googlegro­ups.com>,
jphalt@aol.com says...
On Sun, 27 Apr 2008 18:22:40 -0400, Matt Ion wrote
I'm not picking on your reviews or methods, just kind of speaking
generally about this whole "uniform" topic. There's been an ongoing
debate almost since the start about the "proper" sequence of episodes,
with Joe even listing his specific preference. There are ways THE
STORY
makes sense, and yet people get hung up on which uniforms they're
wearing on which days. It's almost like, for some, the only thing
that
matters is whether the uniforms are in the right sequence, regardless of=
how the storyline works, regardless of what Joe says.
Not saying that's you, just saying, it's been made a way bigger deal
than it really should be. <<

<snip>

I don't know. I've explained twice in this thread - indeed, in the
quoted section - exactly why I have, late in the game, revised my
sequence to include the uniforms. Namely, that I'm including the
unfilmed scripts, and that one of them explicitly makes uniform
continuity an issue. Since I'm including the script, I don't see how
I can ignore the continuity issues that are very much a part of that
script. So far as I can see, no one has actually made a reply to that
point. But I'm honestly too tired to keep arguing it.

Matt wasn't arguing, he was using what you said as a springboard to a point he
wanted to make.

I've enjoyed doing these reviews, and posting these reviews here.
I've enjoyed seeing what reaction they get. But lately, it's stopped
being so much fun. Some of that's reaction - these days, it seems the
reviews are either ignored or draw complaints, sometimes complaints
that have little enough to do with what I actually wrote (the reaction
to my "Legend of the Rangers" review, in particular, had vehement
replies to criticisms of the show... that were mostly not the
criticisms I had actually made). But in fairness, that's not all of
it. After all, the single most negative reaction one of my reviews
ever got was, I believe, "Grail" - and that was a very long time ago
now. It's just that this has all started to feel a bit draining.
I'll continue to write the reviews - with 18 reviews left, it would be
silly not to - and I'll still post them to my thread for them on the
Television Forum at Outpost Gallifrey. But I think it's time for me
to stop posting them here. After all, this was always meant to be a
way for me to mentally relax myself. When posting reviews on the
Internet for a television show starts to actually create stress
instead of relieve it, that's probably a sign that it's time to stop.

I, for one, hope you'll reconsider. I think your reviews have been a great
basis for conversation and whether I've agreed or not, I've enjoyed reading
them.

Jan


--
We see what we look for and we look for what we think we will see.
--jms

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Amy Guskin 28 April 2008 16:49:02 permanent link ]
 
On Mon, 28 Apr 2008 00:53:32 -0400, jphalt@aol.com wrote
(in article
<64d7aaaf-8919-4ad6­-9f93-08f35c8a6686@u­36g2000prf.googlegro­ups.com>):
Which raises another thing that's been building for a while...
I've enjoyed doing these reviews, and posting these reviews here.
I've enjoyed seeing what reaction they get. But lately, it's stopped
being so much fun. Some of that's reaction - these days, it seems the
reviews are either ignored or draw complaints, sometimes complaints
that have little enough to do with what I actually wrote (the reaction
to my "Legend of the Rangers" review, in particular, had vehement
replies to criticisms of the show... that were mostly not the
criticisms I had actually made). But in fairness, that's not all of
it. After all, the single most negative reaction one of my reviews
ever got was, I believe, "Grail" - and that was a very long time ago
now. It's just that this has all started to feel a bit draining. <<

Are you _kidding_?! I love these reviews, and usually agree with you so
completely that there's simply no point in replying. "Grail," in fact, is
one I like _very_ much, so it wouldn't have been me complaining. I wonder if
that's not what's going on here -- we all know from years of being on the
internet that most people moved to write about something are those who have a
_complaint_.

On the uniforms issue in this episode, I am not saying you're wrong, or an
idiot, or anything else for pointing out that the uniform issue _is_ in fact
brought up in the script; I'm just agreeing with Matt that in general, I
think fans overthink or make too much of a big deal about this -- and other
things like that. For me, anyway, I'm just as happy to ignore the mention of
the reason for the uniform switch and just 'go with it' and watch the show.
It's like the military ranks; I don't obsess about small details like that,
and to me, the uniforms are a small detail.

This takes away _nothing_ from your excellent and well thought out reviews.
If anything, it's interesting to have a reason to start discussing things
from the show once again...and discussion on the internet is usually
_complaining_.

Regarding "Rangers," I'd have to check back on the thread to be sure, but I
am usually someone who supports that movie when the complaining starts, so I
certainly would have fallen on your side of the dividing line for that one.

I'll continue to write the reviews - with 18 reviews left, it would be
silly not to - and I'll still post them to my thread for them on the
Television Forum at Outpost Gallifrey. But I think it's time for me
to stop posting them here. After all, this was always meant to be a
way for me to mentally relax myself. When posting reviews on the
Internet for a television show starts to actually create stress
instead of relieve it, that's probably a sign that it's time to stop. <<

Oh, please don't do that! I'm asking you to _please_ reconsider! And those
of you reading the thread who enjoy these reviews, please pop in and show
your support for JP. I mean, obviously, I can just pull them out of the
Yahoo group and post them here, but I'd rather it be something you actively
want.

Whenever I pop in to moderate and see that there's a review from you, I'm
always pleased that there's going to be something really interesting to read.
I sincerely enjoy these reviews, and if I've been any part of discussions
that have caused you stress, I'm sorry for it. But you have to remember, the
criticism is largely _not_ being directed at you; it's just that people have
such strong opinions about this show, they can't help arguing their points
even this many years after cancellation.

Amy
--
"In my line of work you gotta keep repeating things over and over and over
again for the truth to sink in, to kinda catapult the propaganda." - George
W. Bush, May 24, 2005

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Joan Cross 28 April 2008 18:16:37 permanent link ]
 
I'll continue to write the reviews - with 18 reviews left, it would be
silly not to - and I'll still post them to my thread for them on the
Television Forum at Outpost Gallifrey. But I think it's time for me
to stop posting them here. After all, this was always meant to be a
way for me to mentally relax myself. When posting reviews on the
Internet for a television show starts to actually create stress
instead of relieve it, that's probably a sign that it's time to stop. <<
Oh, please don't do that! I'm asking you to _please_ reconsider! And
those
of you reading the thread who enjoy these reviews, please pop in and show
your support for JP. I mean, obviously, I can just pull them out of the
Yahoo group and post them here, but I'd rather it be something you
actively
want.
Whenever I pop in to moderate and see that there's a review from you, I'm
always pleased that there's going to be something really interesting to
read.
I sincerely enjoy these reviews, and if I've been any part of discussions
that have caused you stress, I'm sorry for it. But you have to remember,
the
criticism is largely _not_ being directed at you; it's just that people
have
such strong opinions about this show, they can't help arguing their points
even this many years after cancellation.
Amy
--

I don't often come out of lurking but in this case I feel I must. Please
don't stop
posting your reviews. I really have enjoyed them and have learned things
about
some of the that I hadn't before. So as Jan and Amy say please, please do
reconsider.

Joan

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Christophe Bachmann 28 April 2008 19:27:30 permanent link ]
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jphalt@aol.com a crit :
On Apr 27, 8:17 pm, Amy Guskin <aisl...@fjordstone­.com> wrote:
I don't know. I've explained twice in this thread - indeed, in the
quoted section - exactly why I have, late in the game, revised my
sequence to include the uniforms. Namely, that I'm including the
unfilmed scripts, and that one of them explicitly makes uniform
continuity an issue. Since I'm including the script, I don't see how
I can ignore the continuity issues that are very much a part of that
script. So far as I can see, no one has actually made a reply to that
point. But I'm honestly too tired to keep arguing it.

I don't think the poster was arguing with you, I rather think he was
taking a tangent in making a point without reference to you specifically.
I'll continue to write the reviews - with 18 reviews left, it would be
silly not to - and I'll still post them to my thread for them on the
Television Forum at Outpost Gallifrey. But I think it's time for me
to stop posting them here. After all, this was always meant to be a
way for me to mentally relax myself. When posting reviews on the
Internet for a television show starts to actually create stress
instead of relieve it, that's probably a sign that it's time to stop.
I, for one must thank you for having posted your reviews here. If you
don't feel comfortable going on I have to support you, but please, at
least, post the full url of where your reviews will be so I'll be able
to take a look there. I thoroughly enjoyed your reviews, even if I
never had anything significant to add, and prefer lurking silently to
making 'WTG' posts.
--
Greetings, Salutations,
Guiraud Belissen, Ch eau du Ciel, Drachenwald,
Chris CII, Rennes, France


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On Sun, 27 Apr 2008 21:53:32 -0700, jphalt@aol.com wrote:


I'll continue to write the reviews - with 18 reviews left, it would be
silly not to - and I'll still post them to my thread for them on the
Television Forum at Outpost Gallifrey. But I think it's time for me to
stop posting them here. After all, this was always meant to be a way
for me to mentally relax myself. When posting reviews on the Internet
for a television show starts to actually create stress instead of
relieve it, that's probably a sign that it's time to stop.

Just gotta second what's been said by others here. I love reading your
reviews, and check frequently here for new ones. It's almost like
watching the series again but from a different set of eyes. It's greatly
enjoyable, appreciated, and missed when absent.



--
Jeremy Nickurak -= Email/Jabber: atrus@rifetech.com =-


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Dave Hayslett 29 April 2008 00:40:00 permanent link ]
 On Mon, 28 Apr 2008 12:49:02 GMT, Amy Guskin wrote:

On Mon, 28 Apr 2008 00:53:32 -0400, jphalt@aol.com wrote

...

I'll continue to write the reviews - with 18 reviews left, it would be
silly not to - and I'll still post them to my thread for them on the
Television Forum at Outpost Gallifrey. But I think it's time for me
to stop posting them here. After all, this was always meant to be a
way for me to mentally relax myself. When posting reviews on the
Internet for a television show starts to actually create stress
instead of relieve it, that's probably a sign that it's time to stop. <<
Oh, please don't do that! I'm asking you to _please_ reconsider! And those
of you reading the thread who enjoy these reviews, please pop in and show
your support for JP. I mean, obviously, I can just pull them out of the
Yahoo group and post them here, but I'd rather it be something you actively
want.

Seconded. I can't say I always agree with your reviews, but I consistently
enjoy reading them.

--
Dave (4/28/2008 4:39:48 PM)

Let me explain. No, there is too much. Let me sum up.

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Craig 29 April 2008 01:38:08 permanent link ]
 On Mon, 28 Apr 2008 16:40:00 -0400, Dave Hayslett wrote:

On Mon, 28 Apr 2008 12:49:02 GMT, Amy Guskin wrote:
On Mon, 28 Apr 2008 00:53:32 -0400, jphalt@aol.com wrote
...
I'll continue to write the reviews - with 18 reviews left, it would be
silly not to - and I'll still post them to my thread for them on the
Television Forum at Outpost Gallifrey. But I think it's time for me
to stop posting them here. After all, this was always meant to be a
way for me to mentally relax myself. When posting reviews on the
Internet for a television show starts to actually create stress
instead of relieve it, that's probably a sign that it's time to stop. <<
Oh, please don't do that! I'm asking you to _please_ reconsider! And those
of you reading the thread who enjoy these reviews, please pop in and show
your support for JP. I mean, obviously, I can just pull them out of the
Yahoo group and post them here, but I'd rather it be something you actively
want.
Seconded. I can't say I always agree with your reviews, but I consistently
enjoy reading them.

I agree. Jphalt's reviews are something I lookforward to on this group.
Keep em coming please.

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Wayne Dernoncourt 29 April 2008 05:37:31 permanent link ]
 On Mon, 28 Apr 2008 00:53:32 -0400, jphalt@aol.com wrote
(in article
<64d7aaaf-8919-4ad6­-9f93-08f35c8a6686@u­36g2000prf.googlegro­ups.com>):
<snip>
Which raises another thing that's been building for a while...

I've enjoyed doing these reviews, and posting these reviews here.
I've enjoyed seeing what reaction they get. But lately, it's stopped
being so much fun. Some of that's reaction - these days, it seems the
reviews are either ignored or draw complaints, sometimes complaints
that have little enough to do with what I actually wrote (the reaction
to my "Legend of the Rangers" review, in particular, had vehement
replies to criticisms of the show... that were mostly not the
criticisms I had actually made). But in fairness, that's not all of
it. After all, the single most negative reaction one of my reviews
ever got was, I believe, "Grail" - and that was a very long time ago
now. It's just that this has all started to feel a bit draining.

(posted as someone who read almost all of the traffic but rarely
says anything)
I love these reviews - they give me a different perspective on things.
The reviews are much better than mine (usually like "That was good",
or "That one sucked green slimy rocks"). I actually got some chuckles
from "Visitors".

I'll continue to write the reviews - with 18 reviews left, it would be
silly not to - and I'll still post them to my thread for them on the
Television Forum at Outpost Gallifrey. But I think it's time for me
to stop posting them here. After all, this was always meant to be a
way for me to mentally relax myself. When posting reviews on the
Internet for a television show starts to actually create stress
instead of relieve it, that's probably a sign that it's time to stop.




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Guest 29 April 2008 05:54:32 permanent link ]
 On Apr 28, 2:38 pm, Craig <CBobc...@SBCGlobal­.net> wrote:
On Mon, 28 Apr 2008 16:40:00 -0400, Dave Hayslett wrote:
On Mon, 28 Apr 2008 12:49:02 GMT, Amy Guskin wrote:
On Mon, 28 Apr 2008 00:53:32 -0400, jph...@aol.com wrote
...
I'll continue to write the reviews - with 18 reviews left, it would be
silly not to - and I'll still post them to my thread for them on the
Television Forum at Outpost Gallifrey. But I think it's time for me
to stop posting them here. After all, this was always meant to be a
way for me to mentally relax myself. When posting reviews on the
Internet for a television show starts to actually create stress
instead of relieve it, that's probably a sign that it's time to stop. <<
Oh, please don't do that! I'm asking you to _please_ reconsider! And those
of you reading the thread who enjoy these reviews, please pop in and show
your support for JP. I mean, obviously, I can just pull them out of the
Yahoo group and post them here, but I'd rather it be something you actively
want.
Seconded. I can't say I always agree with your reviews, but I consistently
enjoy reading them.
I agree.Jphalt'srevie­ws are something I lookforward to on this group.
Keep em coming please.- Hide quoted text -
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Fair enough. A lot of the post last night came from just general
exhaustion, anyway. I haven't been entirely in a "happy place" for
the last week or so, so I probably was a bit quicker to react to
things I'd normally have just ignored. With a little distance, it
seems just as silly to do the last 18 reviews and not post them as it
would be to stop doing them this close to the end. So I will continue
to post the reviews as I complete them. I might steer clear of the
actual discussion until I feel a bit more energized in general,
though.

My thanks to everyone who replied, either in this thread or by e-
mail.

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Amy Guskin 29 April 2008 07:00:29 permanent link ]
 
On Mon, 28 Apr 2008 21:54:32 -0400, jphalt@gmail.com wrote
(in article
<9e74a64e-4725-493a­-95f5-5e84898640fd@w­8g2000prd.googlegrou­ps.com>):

On Apr 28, 2:38 pm, Craig <CBobc...@SBCGlobal­.net> wrote:
On Mon, 28 Apr 2008 16:40:00 -0400, Dave Hayslett wrote:
On Mon, 28 Apr 2008 12:49:02 GMT, Amy Guskin wrote:
On Mon, 28 Apr 2008 00:53:32 -0400, jph...@aol.com wrote
...
I'll continue to write the reviews - with 18 reviews left, it would be
silly not to - and I'll still post them to my thread for them on the
Television Forum at Outpost Gallifrey. But I think it's time for me
to stop posting them here. After all, this was always meant to be a
way for me to mentally relax myself. When posting reviews on the
Internet for a television show starts to actually create stress
instead of relieve it, that's probably a sign that it's time to stop. <<
Oh, please don't do that! I'm asking you to _please_ reconsider!
And those
of you reading the thread who enjoy these reviews, please pop in and show
your support for JP. I mean, obviously, I can just pull them out of the
Yahoo group and post them here, but I'd rather it be something you
actively
want.
Seconded. I can't say I always agree with your reviews, but I
consistently
enjoy reading them.
I agree.Jphalt'srevie­ws are something I lookforward to on this group.
Keep em coming please.- Hide quoted text -
- Show quoted text -
Fair enough. A lot of the post last night came from just general
exhaustion, anyway. I haven't been entirely in a "happy place" for
the last week or so, so I probably was a bit quicker to react to